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Teen Poetry #8
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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
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0 posted 2008-03-03 06:53 PM


how do you do
just what you do
walking on water
you make my heart bleed through

sent from heaven
your this perfect light
encased in beauty
and sent to make this right

your so gorgeous
and i cant find my tounge
its as if im trapt here
bound and drugged

your intoxicating
your my drug of choice
no needle necessary
i just need your voice

holding hands
we stand in time
the endless pool of everything
forms life to rhyme

i love you
and your just too pure
i know your my disease
and i just want more
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with you
1 posted 2008-03-03 06:57 PM

"your intoxicating
your my drug of choice
no needle necessary
i just need your voice'


ohh I know this....

very nice!
Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05
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2 posted 2008-03-04 06:55 PM

This is really good...your word choice was excellent.... Super poem

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