navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #8 » Labyrinth of Lovers
Teen Poetry #8
Post A Reply Post New Topic Labyrinth of Lovers Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Ri
Member
since 2008-02-01
Posts 67
Blackburn, England

0 posted 2008-03-02 05:42 AM



Caught within the Labyrinth of Lovers
It’s just you and I; there are no others
But for songbirds fluttering delicate
And old wise trees murmuring elegant

Far from reality; nothing’s amiss
We’ve lost ourselves with our first blissful kiss
Though lost, I can finally understand
As we discover our way, hand in hand

I hope that you aren’t another dead end
For all my prior paths seemed to pretend
What will we find at the heart of our maze?
Will it be the same warmth found in your gaze?

Please hold my hand and don’t lead me astray
Please, my amazing angel, lead the way

© Copyright 2008 Rian Mercer - All Rights Reserved
RedNail
Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden
1 posted 2008-03-02 06:59 AM


Wow Ri, you have a way with words that really gets to me. I'm usually not very fond of romantic poems but this is an exception.


Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #8 » Labyrinth of Lovers

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary