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Teen Poetry #8

The Doll I am

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

0 posted 2008-03-01 06:03 PM

The Doll I am

Blue eyes
Golden hair
Sitting on a shelf
Pretending no one's there

No screams
No tears
Fixed to the extreme

Blue eyes
Golden hair
Locked in a shell
to satisfy whoever's near

No sorrow
No fear
Just a doll
There's no reason to bear

Blue eyes
Golden hair
Don't hide your secrets
'Cause I'm not here

Some things are meant to be in the dark.

Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

[This message has been edited by RedNail (03-01-2008 11:32 PM).]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-01 09:51 PM

hmm interesting how you connect your feelings to a doll. thats pretty cool how you did that. I could never do that. lol keep it up!!

~Zach~

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-03-01 09:54 PM

hmm, to me it sounds like you're trying to convince yourself that everything is fine. If so I know the feeling, great write..

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

3 posted 2008-03-01 11:07 PM

Thank you for your feedback, I noticed now that the last lines were cut off. (-.-")

Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

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