Teen Poetry #8 |
My life |
ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
She was born during a beautiful morning Ready to see what life has for her Never to know that the future Is waiting to come for her As she grew up Wanting to know and see everything She found out that her family Wasn’t in the best harmony All the fighting that happens All the screams, all too loud All the tears that stream, All is not as good as it may seem Everything happens for a reason, Is what she heard all her life Later to find out soon That her father is now without a wife Only six weeks later He is remarried once again Third time is the charm Hopefully this one is better in the end All the fighting that happens All the screams, all too loud All the tears that stream, All is not as good as it may seem Her mother is on her own Trying to find herself She ends up having a beautiful baby boy To a man nowhere near wealth She feels once again alone No one to turn or talk to Always afraid to just pick up that phone Never feeling that she can be rescued All the fighting that happens All the screams, all too loud All the tears that stream, All is not as good as it may seem After she gets used to the situation Her heart begins to heal She finds out it is better this way Making it all seem unreal Now she is happy All the fighting is now gone No more worries to tend to She has been waiting so, so long. All the love that is shared All the comfort and sereneness All cannot be compared And finally… All is as wonderful as it may seem [This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (03-04-2008 08:28 PM).] |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohhh WOW!!! Welcome to Passions Jessica... I really liked this and I hope i will get tue read more soon!!! hehe hmm another Jessica.. hehe realli popular name around here hehe!! Krysti |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Hey Im Falling rain (you can call me Zach) And i thought this pome was amamzing for one of your first posts. I can't wait to see more. and welcome to PIP Have a great day!! |
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RedNail Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 65Stockholm, Sweden |
Welcome to pip. I really like your first poem here and I hope to see more from you soon. ^^, Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!! Exelent first post! Loved it! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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ILoveTheRain Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157GA |
I just realized that I messed up! "After she gets used to the situation Her heart begins to heal She finds out it is better this way Making it seem unreal Now she is happy All the fighting is now gone No more worries to tend to She has been waiting so, so long." Apologies to everyone!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Welcome To pip! ARCTIC WIND |
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starpower Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 82Utah |
Wow that was a wonderful poem that you worte and you can send me an email st [email protected] You can send me an email, |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
welcome to pip |
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