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Teen Poetry #8
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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
0 posted 2008-03-14 11:39 PM

Glares
And stares
Flames
I see them
In your eyes
It's like flies
Hatred
Ungratitude
It all comes clear
With that attitude
When the flowers grow
Bad soul
Keeps them whole
Petals
Turned black
One glance
Shrivelled
And dry
This is how
The body dies
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starpower
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 82
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1 posted 2008-03-15 05:07 PM

Wow that was a great poem and keep up good workd and wirting the poems

You can send me an email,
Thanks
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