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Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-10-20 04:56 PM

too much is racing
through my mind
as you you tell the tale
that makes me lose my mind
it hurts too much
you have no clue
all of this
is because of you

i want you to die
to see how it feels
i went through it all
i know how it kills
you laugh at my thoughts
of a pristine life
all i want is a chance
to see what its like

with no more taunts
with no more pain
where i can walk
like one in the same
not to be diffrent
not to be me
to live in a diffrent world
than the one i see

This is the only life you have, so live it to be remembered

[This message has been edited by Tempest (10-20-2006 06:42 PM).]

Renegade
Junior Member

since 2006-10-21

Posts 22

1 posted 2006-10-21 05:05 PM

I can really relate to it because im quite the outcast :-\
:]

Danni Girl
New Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 1

2 posted 2008-03-03 12:10 PM

I so relate to this i feel like a the school freak every day. Good write

**Danni

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-03-03 01:39 AM

Wow.. here I go thinking I have read all of your poems.. but I know if I read this I would have replied.. back in... wow seems like so long ago I read your poems regularly... ahh yess back wen the grass was green and I had time haha I really enjoy wen your poems come back onto the front pages... kinda brings back Tempest..

good to have your old poems back!!

Krysti

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-03-03 05:37 PM

I like your PIP name

ARCTIC WIND

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-03-03 07:29 PM

wow this discribes my life pretty well... great job!

theiamsadsong
Junior Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 17

6 posted 2008-03-05 12:47 PM

this was an inpirational poem... it connects with a real persons wish to live in a space different from what they do. it is truly beautiful, honest.
love,
monica

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

7 posted 2008-03-05 07:38 PM

Beautiful.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

tiny_ME
Junior Member

since 2008-03-01

Posts 26

8 posted 2008-03-15 09:35 AM

,.,.nice poem,.,
i feel that way too sometimes,,..:p

-christina-

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

9 posted 2008-03-15 03:04 PM

That was a nice poem and keep up the wirting

You can send me an email,
Thanks

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

10 posted 2008-03-15 03:15 PM

nice write!

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