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Teen Poetry #8

Cuts

Tinsel
Junior Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 36
UK

0 posted 2008-03-01 04:38 PM

An epic battle with a cat,
An accident while cooking,
The lies dripped like syrup,
Stuck like tar,
Words inexplicably entwined with glass
That takes a while to draw blood.
Head off the tears,
Block them with sweet distracting pain
That lives a life under long sleeves.
Chimerical scars and fears,
Too real to be true,
My logic winds around a doctors mind,
Sense has no place in a world,
Where I burst out of my body, spilling,
Leaking, into everything else,
Or shrink like cold metal,
To a pit that cheer cannot reach.
I am sorry, I am sorry,
To cause you so much pain,
But tell me, tell me please,
If my flesh cannot split,
What else can I do?

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

1 posted 2008-03-01 05:29 PM

This is so sad, that's all I can say. A good poem, but just so sad. Life is a rollercoster, you live for the ride. I hope you'll feel better soon.

Some things are meant to be in the dark.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-03-01 06:50 PM

Sad indeed. I like it alot and know how you feel, hate the feeling, love the poem. Great job,

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-03-01 07:18 PM

hope things get better. great poem by the way...

~Zach~

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