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RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

0 posted 2008-02-29 09:10 PM

Vagabond Vitality

I like to sit in the darkness each day
as no one can hear my memories
fade away.

Inspired by a life other than mine
am I here, same place as I've been
to before and wish to visit no more.

Life passes by on a movie screen
frequently am I asking what
will become of me.

I find no answer and therefor,
I move on to yet another place
where I don't belong.

Sometimes, things are more beautiful in the dark.

[This message has been edited by RedNail (03-01-2008 07:16 PM).]

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-02-29 09:19 PM

welcome to pip.

as for a title...

become of me

would be good.

I enjoyed your first post.

*please check your email for a special greeting

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-02-29 10:31 PM

I like this alot, as for the title....Unsolved answers Hidden in the Dark...? well it's ur poem. haha this title sounds like one that RevengeIsMine would come up with...
Anyway, I hope u find a fitting title, and welcome to pip!!

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Broken Toy
Junior Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 18
ThatSmallWorldCalledInsanity

3 posted 2008-03-01 08:33 AM

Welcome to PIP, i liked the poem. Keep up the good work.

I am a broken toy,
Of no use to anyone,
But if you fix me up,
I'm sure we'll have some fun.

[This message has been edited by Broken Toy (03-01-2008 09:13 AM).]

Ri
Member

since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

4 posted 2008-03-01 02:37 PM

I like this poem alot it has good rhythm, will definately be keeping an eye out for more.
Title wise I would suggest Vagabond Vitality

RedNail
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 65
Stockholm, Sweden

5 posted 2008-03-01 04:20 PM

Thank you all for this warm welcome, as for the title, Vagabond Vitality is just perfect. Thank you Ri.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2008-03-02 12:04 PM

Welcome To Passions!!!1 hope yooh like it heer.. I really loved this poem... yooh are a very talented writer and i hope to read more from yooh..
Krysti

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-03-03 05:31 PM

Welcome To pip!

ARCTIC WIND

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