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Teen Poetry #8

Lullaby

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-10 09:51 PM

Me and my friend wrote this for a story/book thing that I am attempting to write. So far it isn't working very well but whatever. It's supposed to be a song...

Once apon a stormy
night, I cried to you
my child. This ten
stinged lyre was woven
from my song.
The foamy sea will rock
your craddle, fall into
my arms. The dust of
old and new has caught
the tide.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-02-10 09:54 PM

oh i love the sea and anything about it- it's so beautiful to write about this is being added to my faves, i should go to bed though now- lol it's late.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-02-19 05:43 PM

Very Well Said!

ARCTIC WIND

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-02-19 05:46 PM

interesting...

~Zach~

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

4 posted 2008-02-19 07:34 PM

emily this is WONDERFUL,keep it goin and this will be a hip to the hop song lol

~-Keagan-~

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-03-02 05:51 PM

OH!! I GET IT NOW!! hahaha! thanx for the comments guys!

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

theiamsadsong
Junior Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 17

6 posted 2008-03-03 01:36 PM

wow...this is really beautiful its so poetic without being over done. nice work!

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