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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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well well what have we here a life thats wasted in horror and fear left alone it just ages like wine perfect on the outside like everythings fine smiles so forced through gritted teeth you just wave them on because they just dont see hurting and left all alone forty floors above the world its so bitter cold so i'll run now and never look back jump off the railing and hope to crack im just a hollow shell of what i was before aching and hurting but begging for more |
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SunnySyn Junior Member
since 2008-02-19
Posts 15Texas, United States |
LOVED IT!!! That was fantabulous. (Yes I mashed the words Fantastic and Fabulous together.)But honestly that was a good reading.  |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Amazing...I was flabergahsted....(how the heck do u spell that...*mumbles to self*) {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
umm another good piece, you are incredibly good- do you know that? -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Amazing! I'm speachless! that doesn't often happen! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
You were right, Talent Never Dies.. It only gets stronger... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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