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Teen Poetry #8

Loved or Alone

wishesanddreams
New Member

since 2008-02-26

Posts 5

0 posted 2008-02-27 12:10 PM

Alone again
wishing on stars
the same thing over and over again
wishing to be loved
not alone
waiting on the day
but will it ever come?
will I always feel alone?
will I ever feel loved?
waiting, hoping, praying for that day
when someone says, says something I've never heard before
something I can't even say
so why would I feel it?
why do I want it so badly?
the questions that haunt me
that bother me
that won't go away
why cant it be that day
that special day when someones says it
something I can't even say
am I loved or just alone
why is it so?
what did I do wrong?
where did it turn?
what happens now?
it can't end in questions
it can't end in fear
but the end is near

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-02-27 01:38 AM

ohhh i really like this poem!!
Krysti

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-02-27 11:42 AM

This is a beautiful poem wishes! I hope you find what your looking for.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Ri
Member

since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

3 posted 2008-02-27 05:27 PM

I like the questions raised in this poem, and how they are presented, and hope you find the answers

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-27 09:45 PM

Good Write!

ARCTIC WIND

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-02-27 10:59 PM

itrestingly lovely...I see what you're talking about though, sometimes I feel the same.

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

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