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wishesanddreams New Member
since 2008-02-26
Posts 5 |
the tears are rolling yet no one sees keeping to myself I see all the smiling faces wishing it was me this time I can't feel all the lies are closing in suffocating in it all to tired to fight giving up is all I've got leaving it all behind cant you see all the things you put on me why cant I just leave but what can I do there's nothing left tomorrow's just another day wishing to find a better way nothing left but the faces of my mistakes falling faster as if there's nothing there |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I look forward to reading more of your thoughts. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
welcome to PIP!!! this is a great first write. i can't wait to see more!! ~Zach~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
welcome to Passions  hope to read more soon.. great first postd D:Krysti |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Welcome to PIP!!!!! I realy enjoyed this poem! I mean your first post is going in my library! Good job. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP! ARCTIC WIND |
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