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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
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Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-02-26 03:41 PM


blood is the ink
that rights this story
lets tear out the last chapter
and sleep while its burning

sorrys not my thing
and i dont do it well
i never have before
i dont dont plan on starting now

but here i am
im on my knees
lets start over
and this chapter we'll read

lullabied,
we drift off to sleep
the chapters still burning
and a fresh one we'll need

and when the book is finished
we can hang it on the shelf
forget about it in time
and drink to our good health

inhale, exhale
the air goes to your head
sit sown, collect yourself
and then go back to bed

© Copyright 2008 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2008-02-27 01:10 AM


Wow Bryan loved this... it always iz hard to say sorry glad yooh are doing it now tho..
Krysti

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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2 posted 2008-02-27 09:42 PM


Loved it!

ARCTIC WIND

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