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Teen Poetry #8

tears

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2008-02-26 12:10 PM

tears fall down my face
to cover the pain
they burn my cheecks
they sting my eyes

in my head i think
why did my mom die?
why did my aunt leave?
why do i feel oh soo alone
can i ever leave

im so attached to my father
i want the pain to go away
they only that can heal a wound so big
is time and rest

there will always be a scar
a reminder of what i have endured

things fall apart and come back together again
its almost a sin

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-02-26 10:12 PM

I love the first stanza, it really reminded me of something. Great job.

FoReVeRbRokEn

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-02-27 09:42 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

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