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Teen Poetry #8

I Leave this world

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2008-02-26 02:20 AM

The time as come for me
to ascend to the sky
As I leave this world,
I send my dearest goodbyes
The howling winds casts
a shadow of remembrance
And the soul burns brightly
as I fall into the night.

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-27 06:45 PM

i like it. this is going in my favorites. keep it up!

~Zach~

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-02-28 06:56 PM

love it, short but interesting at the same time. Great job,

{~~~*~~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-02-28 07:45 PM

Very nice!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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