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Teen Poetry #8

Abused Wishes

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-01-21 07:54 AM

Abused, confused and all alone
She wishes for a brand, new start
She wonders what life will ever hold,
For a girl with a broken heart

She’s dreamt of castles and stars
Far away princesses too
She would give all the world,
Just to try on a fairytale shoe

If she got, just one last wish,
She’d wish to be out of this place
Maybe a day, maybe some more,
She’d wish to be out of this race

[&] she's a blood broken rose

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

1 posted 2008-01-21 12:38 PM

beautiful!!!

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-01-21 03:25 PM

love this amazing poem!!!
Krysti

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

3 posted 2008-01-21 10:46 PM

Thanx guys! I'm so glad I found this website. IT's truly amazing and it's a great way for other poets to communicate. Keep on writing everyone!

[&] she's a blood broken rose

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

4 posted 2008-02-28 07:45 PM

nice poem. but very sad.
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

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