Fractured Truths, So Sharp They Bleed

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Teen Poetry #8

Fractured Truths, So Sharp They Bleed

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2008-02-28 06:24 AM

Well my brother broke up with his girlfriend and he's upgraded this time too a 19 year old *my so called best mate* well it happened on my birthday and it's upset me heaps.. considering they both promised they wouldn't anyway i don't like this poem much i personally think its dodgey but hey...
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Fractured Truths So Sharp They Bleed

Its too late to apologies
Whats done is done
The war is finally over
And i guess you really won.

I’m smiling on the out side
But deep down i’m in pain.
Those fragmented afflictions
Are driving me insane

You can tell by your eyes
That you’re lying
Too think that you slept with my brother
Makes me sit here crying

You sat there and promised
I trusted your word
But still you slept with him
And it cuts like a sword

Dig the knife in a little deeper
And just maybe I’ll start crying
I’m so sick of your broken promises
That deep down I feel like dying

You’re supposed to be my best mate
Don’t know where the hell i got that
Seems u played me for a fool
Hell girl you can act

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-02-28 04:41 PM

wow- your life is littered with good intentions for good intenders that always seem to go sour round the middle.

-Kate

feel better- i don't know how that feels- but i know it sucks, love you jess, keep your heart.

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-02-28 05:30 PM

well dang. I don't know what to say...That must really suck. I can't imagine going through all what you have, i wouldn't have made it this far probably. I hope it all gets better!...good poem!
luv ya lots,
Em
{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-02-28 05:58 PM

I second.
I'm sooo sorry.
theres nothing I can say...

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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