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Sorry Is Just A Word
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Sorry Is Just A Word |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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sorry is a word that everyone uses but no one really means its just a thing that you say to to get away with everything that you can every lie makes you lighter and every hit takes you higher every lie just makes this brighter untill were are all on fire scarlet flows from your shineing wings as you fly above me just look at the scene you pushed me from the scaffold so please dont look so baffled doesnt it feel good to make me come unraveled im dying here [This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (02-26-2008 06:35 PM).] |
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crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
hey hey, great write, like most of ur stuff. i really liked when u said, "dosn't it feel good/ to make me come unraveled", some times i hate the fact that people enjoy picking on others. wonderful<3 !Tracey! if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying |
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rebel~angel Member
since 2006-06-20
Posts 71Iowa USA |
Wow! I love the first stanza... sorry is a word that everyone uses but no one really means its just a thing that you say to to get away with everything that you can This poem...at least, until the last part, is soooo true...and then I got to the last bit and it reminded me of friends betraying friends, and I don't know if that's actually what it's about or not, but that part can be true too...I think what that babble is supposed to say is I can relate to this very well. I loved it! Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming. |
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