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Unforgettable |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Two lovers at the end of an aisle in a little white church Souls connecting in harmony like a songbird sings sitting upon a perch The preacher going through the wedding sermon As they listen knowing inside their hearts are turning They spend glorious days with each other Talking about anything from the day the first met to how nice the weather. Harmony brought this couple together one fine day They make a promise they will forever remain hand in hand until one passes away The next day the world came to an end for one of them She passed away and that was something he didn’t want to comprehend Days turned into months and the months faded into years As he couldn’t seem to stop the flowing of his tears. Until one day he passed by the old schoolhouse He noticed a young woman that looked as if she could be a twin of his ex spouse. They began talking and getting to know each other And at the end of night he thanked God for bringing him this much needed answer. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohh Chris hunn i loved it!!!!! such a sweet poem.. unforgettable  Krysti |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
its very nice, and very hopeful. it was sad at first and worked its way into the whole happy ending thing, and i like that |
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Sweetpoet16m4u04 Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 153Ma, U.S.A |
Thanks for the comments!! I thought this one would be liked! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderfully Penned! ARCTIC WIND |
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