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Can God Speed The Black Emporer
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Can God Speed The Black Emporer |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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Can God Speed the Black Emperor? The candle light is fading in the whispers of October evenings and the long shadows of the world press all around. You bring forgiveness in the midst of my blindness. It's a hint at salvation like sirens hint at coming storms, but it seems to pass without targeting my heart for destruction. I need deconstructing you know. Hearts of stone with orange notes attached, screaming of some impending implosion. Thank God for the candles, the flames seeping out of my pores are less noticeable. Thank God for October and its imploding leaves. What a scene I've become. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
umm- your words always have a way of surpriseing me- in the fact that they should not fit together in the world of reality and real things- and yet they do and so beautifully i might add. and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Heya Alex, Love your work and you know it.. I've always been a "if the poem don't rhyme it sucks" but you have changed that for me... you giv me chills each time i read your work and i love it... |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thanks guys! |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Nothing short of Brilliance!  "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
oh earl, thank you very much. |
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