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Teen Poetry #8

Cornsyrup and Pancakes

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-24 12:33 PM

~just a random poem, inspired by a song.
Stabbed in the heart
with to many darts,
I can't stand anymore.
Today I will fall,
no reason to stay.
Crushed under the feet
of perfidy.

FoReVeRbRokEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-26-2008 08:37 PM).]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-24 07:25 AM

which song were you inspired by?

~Zach~

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-02-24 11:06 AM

Lovely Written!

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

3 posted 2008-02-24 11:10 AM

title unknown, Interesting

xoxoxoxoxx- Star

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-02-25 07:28 PM

Thank you for the complements Artic Wind and Dark Star, and Falling Rain, I was listening to Lies. By evanescence...of corse.

FoReVeRbRokEn

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