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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-23 12:21 PM


~Please help me find a better title, I know this one is kind of boring.
Telling me of fairytail
endings, promising all
I breathed in as nothing
I would regret.
Only after did I see
what lies you fed me,
leading me the whole
way; down to this pit of
deceiving lies.

You fed me this poison,
allowed me to take it
in. Minipulated my
soul into your way of
disbelife. Tangled in the
arms of your lies, beats
my heart of immortality.


FoReVeRbRokEn

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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
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1 posted 2008-02-23 02:11 AM


Hey Em.. Like this lots.. Immortality's Deceit for a title..
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since 2008-01-31
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2 posted 2008-02-23 09:55 AM


decieving lies would be an okay name for it. (it sounds boring to me lol) great poem. i know how you feel.    

~Zach~  



Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
3 posted 2008-02-23 03:20 PM


Lieing is so easy to see, if your willing to believe in yourself

xoxoxoxo- star

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-02-24 10:52 AM


Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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