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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2008-02-22 09:10 AM

Fields of Clover

The eyes that sweep over the crowd
Somehow always miss their intent
Looking just can’t find the one
For whom their gaze is meant

For who could ever judge
The fools that give their hearts
To the ones they love
Their much missed better parts

The night is tiding over
And the dance soon lost its charm
The swaying feet still standing
Need every dancers arm

The gaze of one still looking
Can be found the whole room over
But the one they need-still missing
And draped in fields of clover

How sad the weary eyes of one
Who misses what is lost
That can never be restored-
Not at any cost

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-22 09:15 AM

This poem is awsome it reminds me of my poem "I'll wait for you" (the one you like soo much lol) Great imagry, very beautiful!!!

~Zach~

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2008-02-22 12:49 PM

When I was but a kid, we had an old Irish guy who used to come & visit. I remember one of the songs he used to sing as we sat around the old coal fire was called " The Fields of Athenry" this reminded me of that, Good job

John

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-02-22 02:26 PM

Oh! I'm so honored that this piece may even be metioned in the same sentence as that beautiful song. Thankyou.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-02-22 05:41 PM

Beautiful. Very deep. This is great Kate!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Dark Star
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

5 posted 2008-02-23 03:26 PM

That movie "clover field is very good

xoxoxoxoxox- Star

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

6 posted 2008-02-24 10:54 AM

Enjoyed..

ARCTIC WIND

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