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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-02-21 04:10 PM


here i stand
at loss for what to say
everything ive thought about
seems to slip away

every time you come around
i want to tell you so many things
its just hard to find the words
and the perfect thing to say

say anything
to make me stay
please just dont let me walk away

tongue tied and twisted
my mind simply goes blank
lost inside the secrets
and the things i long to say

i wish that i could scream them
and save your fall from grace
i would sing you to sleep
just to put a smile on your face


[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (02-23-2008 02:49 PM).]

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
1 posted 2008-02-22 05:57 PM


Beautiful!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-02-22 06:39 PM


good job!


Falling rain
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3 posted 2008-02-22 06:47 PM


nice work!

~Zach~  



SEA
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with you
4 posted 2008-02-22 07:19 PM


love this...

excellent..


hunnie_girl
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5 posted 2008-02-23 01:13 PM


wow def. one of my favorites from yooh... i loved it!!!!!
Krysti

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
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Lost in your eyes
6 posted 2008-02-23 03:19 PM


Good stuff

xoxoxoxoxoxoox- star

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-02-24 10:11 AM


I couldn't agree anymore with Sea!

Enjoyed..

ARCTIC WIND

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