Teen Poetry #8 |
Ask Me To Stay |
Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
theres a strage quiet sadness still lingering in the air im still trying to talk to you but i know that you dont care it looks like im the burden in this storm cloud on your head i can tell it from the way you look nothing ever has to be said i know that im not the best you tell me all the time but it would be nice for a change if you would tell me im doing fine im sorry i put you in this place and im sorry that i care enough to bleed but i refuse to simply walk away and continue on with the screams i want you to know i loved you i want you to know i cared but i guess that im just to much pain thats the source of this nightmare your thought just tears me apart and i really have to say im never going to stop living this out i wish it didnt end this way just bleed me out like a tired sound that you cant stand to be around a perfect friend that you threw away one that never would have left if you had asked to stay [This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (02-23-2008 12:26 PM).] |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
oh this makes me so sad- you displayed the emotions well. we all bleed- be thankful you didn't die . . . -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
touching xoxoxoxox-Star |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I know how you feel. I'm sorry "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Amic Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39...I think Im lost again... |
I too can relate, and Im really sorry. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Touching Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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