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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-02-22 09:58 PM


theres a strage quiet sadness
still lingering in the air
im still trying to talk to you
but i know that you dont care

it looks like im the burden
in this storm cloud on your head
i can tell it from the way you look
nothing ever has to be said

i know that im not the best
you tell me all the time
but it would be nice for a change
if you would tell me im doing fine

im sorry i put you in this place
and im sorry that i care enough to bleed
but i refuse to simply walk away
and continue on with the screams

i want you to know i loved you
i want you to know i cared
but i guess that im just to much pain
thats the source of this nightmare

your thought just tears me apart
and i really have to say
im never going to stop living this out
i wish it didnt end this way

just bleed me out
like a tired sound
that you cant stand
to be around
a perfect friend
that you threw away
one that never would have left
if you had asked to stay

[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (02-23-2008 12:26 PM).]

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2008-02-22 10:01 PM


oh this makes me so sad- you displayed the emotions well. we all bleed- be thankful you didn't die . . .

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Dark Star
Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
2 posted 2008-02-23 03:31 PM


touching

xoxoxoxox-Star

Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
3 posted 2008-02-23 06:45 PM



I know how you feel. I'm sorry

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Amic
Junior Member
since 2008-02-17
Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...
4 posted 2008-02-23 09:28 PM


I too can relate, and Im really sorry.
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-24 11:02 AM


Touching Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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