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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-19 11:06 PM



Stumbling for something
or someone to hold onto,
falling in wreckless
circle down staris,
never ending.
Jumping lower on this
laddder, coming
closer to the bottom.
Catch me now before
I can fall any further,
down these stairs of life.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
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at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-02-19 11:15 PM


i like this alot...Good Job!


SunnySyn
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since 2008-02-19
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Texas, United States
2 posted 2008-02-20 07:04 PM


Wow! That was beautiful. I think that is something everyone can relate to, 'falling down the stairs of life.' Beauty in Tragedy. (That's actually the title of a poem I wrote.)

Signing off,
        SunnySyn =)

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
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Lost in your eyes
3 posted 2008-02-20 07:42 PM


sounds scary, falling down all those stairs if it were to happen, thnx for the read

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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BC, Canada
4 posted 2008-02-20 08:18 PM


Beautiful. One of my favorites of yours.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland
5 posted 2008-02-20 08:23 PM


haha! really Earl?! thanx!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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6 posted 2008-02-20 09:05 PM


Oww my head just hurts when ever i think of falling down a long, neverending staircase. lol Great job!!

~Zach~

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