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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland 
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Stumbling for something or someone to hold onto, falling in wreckless circle down staris, never ending. Jumping lower on this laddder, coming closer to the bottom. Catch me now before I can fall any further, down these stairs of life. FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
i like this alot...Good Job! |
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SunnySyn Junior Member
since 2008-02-19
Posts 15Texas, United States |
Wow! That was beautiful. I think that is something everyone can relate to, 'falling down the stairs of life.' Beauty in Tragedy. (That's actually the title of a poem I wrote.)  Signing off, |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
sounds scary, falling down all those stairs if it were to happen, thnx for the read |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Beautiful. One of my favorites of yours. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
haha! really Earl?! thanx! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Oww my head just hurts when ever i think of falling down a long, neverending staircase. lol Great job!! ~Zach~ |
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