Teen Poetry #8 |
Nothing |
Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
I am nothing nothing comes to mind I lost everything in an instant of time I have something something I must do For now I must return to who i once was to save the very person who I had lost to end the nothingness controlling my heart and to save myself from losing all that i love. "Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing, |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Great poem! The meaning behind it is somthing I have been through many times and I wish you the best of luck. Good write! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
simply beautiful.. loved this!!! Krysti |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
Beautifully penned, little shivers walked up my spine reading this. Just bcz, its really well penned |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Great write! I know what you're talking about FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Ian L.R. Sanchez Junior Member
since 2007-07-05
Posts 16 |
I needed this poem... thanks so much for posting T.T |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
interesting.. just interesting... ~Zach~ |
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