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Teen Poetry #8

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Gurl_unknown_11
Junior Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 17
california

0 posted 2008-02-10 06:18 PM

what would you do?
if i said i cared
cared about you with all my heart
what would you do?
if i said i think about you all the time?
that you never escape my mind
what would you do?
if i said everydream is about you
that i dont want to wake up cuz i know you wont be there
what would you do?
if i said i loved you
and have loved you for so long
that ive wanted to hold you
to see you
to comfort you
to be with you
what would you do??would you push me away?
what would say you wanted the same
what would you think
would you love me to
what would you do
if only you knew.....

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2008-02-10 09:38 PM

wow this was awsome. i loved it. r u new to piptalk? if so WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

wolf girl
Member

since 2007-12-03

Posts 150
washington, US

2 posted 2008-02-11 12:26 PM

this is amazing it really puts into words how i feel right now. its wonderful.

-jenna

penguin5
Junior Member

since 2006-05-16

Posts 21
Washington

3 posted 2008-02-11 12:58 PM

great poem. It touches the subject of teenage relationships but doesnt seem to fall into the pitfall of cliche. well done.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-02-11 03:03 PM

Exelent poem! Welcome! I can't wait to hear more for you.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

[This message has been edited by Earl Robertson (02-11-2008 09:48 PM).]

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