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Teen Poetry #8

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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-02-19 05:04 PM

Oh my dear beloved friends
Your support has no end

I love you with all a brotherly love
In status your way above

You cared when i was down
Your sad for me when i frown

I cherish my time with all you at last
My sorrow will live now in the past

My soul has been lifted, i can live once again
The sky of my soul will never rain

Your always with me, think or thin
Your always be cherished my dear old friends

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Lol This picture made me laugh and it fits my poem perfectly! Lol.

~Zach~

[This message has been edited by Falling rain (02-19-2008 06:25 PM).]

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

1 posted 2008-02-19 05:09 PM

hey hey,
i had to laugh at the end! when you said 'cherished' and i saw the picture of the cats it reminded me of the cheshire cat from alice in wonderland!lol.....yeah, we're all weird here

Good write!
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-19 05:20 PM

LMAO!! Now that i noticed that does remind me of the cheshire cat from alice in wonderland. Lol.(i love that story!!) And yes we all are weird in a own ways lol.

~Zach~

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-02-20 10:26 PM

ROTFLMFAO!!! haha niicee Zach such a sweet poem.... and a very cute pic!!!
Krysti

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Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

4 posted 2008-02-21 09:24 PM

Cutie you are...

xoxoxox star

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