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Teen Poetry #8
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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 2008-02-21 07:08 PM


Start it over, I've missed
the point. How can I
prentened not to? Standing
alone in this shadowy corner,
watching my friends live.

I can't say I forgive you,
now I only know; no memories
of my past, no emotions to
show. One day it will all
come to a stop, letting me
out of this confusion.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn
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1 posted 2008-02-21 07:13 PM

oh i know the feeling that your talking about in this poem... Amazing job... this poem is simply amazing!!!

~Zach~
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland
2 posted 2008-02-21 07:22 PM

Really? well that make sone of us. It was forced write lol thank Keagan for the tittle...u really think it's that good??

FoReVeR.BrOkEn
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Lost in your eyes
3 posted 2008-02-21 09:20 PM

Oh it's really good lol
Nice to read from you lol
xoxoxoxox- Star
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