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Teen Poetry #8

Friends are like coins.

lustforgood
Junior Member

since 2008-01-01

Posts 14
singapore, singapore

0 posted 2008-02-19 12:08 PM

I'd feed you my anger
Just so I'll succeed
I've given you this dagger
So that she'll bleed

I know I'm lying
So that I'm satisfied
But now I'm crying
As my glory I'd hide

I'm sorry my brother
I rubbed the salt on your wound
Against your other brother
Now I'm the one being blue.

There is no point
This hatred
Friends are like coins
It's rather head or tail.

I'm sorry

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-19 05:39 PM

aww this is so good!! very heart-felt. i love the last line

"It's rather head or tail"

That line is true but i think its wrong too. Great write!!

~Zach~

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