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Teen Poetry #8

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Amic
Junior Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...

0 posted 2008-02-18 10:28 PM

I know it sounds cliche
But I'll say it anyway
It wasn't me
I didn't do it
It really isnt my fault
Yet it seems as though I caused it
In a twisted way it seems that it
Could not have happened
Without my response
But I know that it would have
As I was paralyzed in fear
I knew what was coming
But could not move
To get away
So I stayed and played the game
That has torn apart my heart
Finally unable
To keep it any longer
I spilled my heart
And told the world
And now I hear that it didn't matter?
I know it sounds cliche
But I'll say it anyway
I will tell them that this was not me
This was not my fault at all
You do not have to believe me
But I will not fall
My view is the right one
And I know that this is true

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-02-19 12:59 PM

Elaine, this iz a really nicee poem, I like the beginning it had such a simple and easy BUT also nice flow to it. Welcome To Pasions, hope to see you around here more

Krysti

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-19 05:42 PM

Amazing! Great first post. Keep up the good work!!

~Zach~

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