Teen Poetry #8 |
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The Doormat Of Heartbreak, Please Wipe Your Feet |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia ![]() |
Hi Guys.. Haven't been around in ages.. but back now lol.. thanks for all the comments on my other work.. Really appreciated.. The title really doesn't fit but its random and soo am i lol.. Well Here Goes... _____________________________________________________ The Doormat Of Heartbreak, Please Wipe Your Feet.. Can you see the deadly fire that burns behind her eyes? It’s burning for revenge, and her last kiss goodbye She used to have a heart you know, but some guy tore it out Tore it from her chest because he said she could do without But still she feels trapped, caught up in his web of lies But this time she see’s through his deceit, see's past his disguise You can say you’re sorry, but she won’t believe a word After all she’s just a random chick, some simple annoying nerd Now your back to hurt her, but she won’t fall for you again You maybe her drug of choice, but this addiction she will win So please leave her alone, just cut her some slack Her freedom’s been a long time coming, and it’s a rather long walk back |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
interesting... good job! yea i just noticed that you havent been on in a long time. (frankly i started to get worried lol j/k) Great job! ~Zach~ |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Great job Jess! as always it's really good. I don't think I can ever be more impressed and surprised than when I read your poems. FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
ooh! i like! good message too! ![]() |
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SunnySyn Junior Member
since 2008-02-19
Posts 15Texas, United States |
That was lovely. Good Job! ![]() Signing off, |
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