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SunnySyn
Junior Member

since 2008-02-19

Posts 15
Texas, United States

0 posted 2008-02-19 12:21 PM

I'm new to the site, so take it easy on me....lol. No, but seriously, tell me your thoughts. I'm always open to new insight. Hope you like it. =)

Life of a Rose
By: A Girl who like flowers

The beauty of the Rose
                            as it dies within
For the lost of a lover,
                            the lost of a friend
Search for the power
                            to be a something that doesn't exist
A love so tempting,
                            unable to resist
The pain of internal death,
                            a desire for external life
A battle beyond the physical,
                            the mental strife
The Rose uses her tears
                            to remind and quench the thirst
The sun to give optimism
                           and to protect her from the curse
Her strength and weakness,
                           the splendor of being kind
A sweet bitterness,
                           to give a present so undefined
Plucked for her beauty
                           then cursed for her thorns
Or left in her habitat
                           to weather a storm
The Rose knows better
                           cause Fate will have its way
She goes on living and dying
                           from day to day

Signing off,
SunnySyn =)

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-02-19 12:55 PM

wow, i really like this. Fantastic first post. I also liked the way that you aranged it on the page, it lookes cool.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-02-19 01:09 AM

Brooke, amazing first post I loved it!!!! Welcome to Passions hope you like the ppl heer... we really aren't that bad hehe:P
Krysti

SunnySyn
Junior Member

since 2008-02-19

Posts 15
Texas, United States

3 posted 2008-02-19 07:07 PM

Thanks! I'm really starting to feel welcome. Hopefully these lovely greetings will continue.

Signing off,
SunnySyn =)

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2008-02-20 12:28 PM

omg i got a new fav author. ur going in my library

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-02-20 08:13 AM

"Search for the power
                            to be a something that doesn't exist
A love so tempting,
                            unable to resist
The pain of internal death,
                            a desire for external life
A battle beyond the physical,
                            the mental strife"

I love that line! And welcome to PIP! I'll give this poem two thumbs up! I can't wait ot see more of your work. Keep up the good work!

~Zach~

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

6 posted 2008-02-20 04:33 PM

wow! thats really good for a first post! i have to admit there was one part that i was kinda confused with but it was overall really good!

i love this:
Plucked for her beauty
then cursed for her thorns

hope to see more of your poems in the future!

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