Teen Poetry #8 |
The Dormant Seed of Solitude |
young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
The Dormant Seed of Solitude The barrren fields inhale deeply and if you look long enough, they may just steal your breath away. My eyes roll along the naked bodies of these once modest lands and notice very little aside from clarity of thought. Emptiness has indirectly led me to this hushed home made of whispering reeds (which are far too secretive). This is the only place I breathe and die, laugh until I cry, wrap my arms around myself and just love myself. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Alex mmm I loved the personification in this....(ohh yess big word for me haha) I loved the feeling of this too it just makes me feeli like I wuz there Krysti |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I really love your work.. every one of your poems touches me.. i think you have one of the most unique talents in this place.. and this is just another piece of proof to prove my very point... |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
well thank you both. I'm so glad that you guys appreciate it. |
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