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The RaceTrack
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The RaceTrack |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
The RaceTrack Cars fly round this twisting track The speed it makes me sick Thousands and thousands of scrap metal heaps Litter the ground as we speak The sky is on fire, a tortuous affair I fly round the same wreckage twice I’ve seen this before the chaos unleashed The crash I can feel coming on Drive round a circle all of you fools! The devil he laughs in delight The sky is on fire and now as I turn I see the next turn in my route Another car crashes and I jump out to help Call for a tow truck to come I reach for the car, the smoldering wreck I help a man his to his feet As behind me my car it explodes into flame My way home seems so hopelessly long But I know why I’m here as I’ve known all along I’ll Walk with my brother, arm in arm "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow i can picture the whole thing happening. (i love imagry poems) Great work!!! ~Zach~ |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wow it reminds me of this poem i wrote i'll have to dig it up and show you lol. it was wonderfully done though- i enjoy all of your stuff. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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