Teen Poetry #8 |
To The Tune of Revenge |
Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
um, as you can see it is to the tune of revenge cause it is little happy kid songs (aka liar, liar, ring around the rosy, and twinkle twinkle little star) and is about REVENGE!!! MUA-HA-HA-HA!!!! ___________________________________________________ To The Tune of Revenge you’re a liar, you’re a liar with a heart Blazing on Fire filled with Horrible Desires -you’re a liar- so we’ll ring around the Devil in a pit of stones and pebbles singing “Ashes! Ashes!” as we Burn you to the ground! flicker, flicker we watch our game- how we Wonder at your Shame! up above our heads you plea- for the Entire World to see! -Flicker, Flicker!- as you cry!- you’ll get No sympathy if you Lie! |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
clever...nice i like it. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I agree soo clever I loooved this:P very niicee Krysti |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Can't believe u only got two comments on this... Its amazing some ppl don't know talent when they see it..!! Really loved it anyways.. Well done.. u portrayed my name very well lol.. Luv, Jess |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
haha! thanks! oh yes, revenge is MINE!!! =) |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
This IS amazing! and clever and pure talent. I would never think of somthing like that to right about. Fantastic! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Ri Member
since 2008-02-01
Posts 67Blackburn, England |
Very original, I love this concept of a child like song to convey more mature emotions =) |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
thanks! i also had the idea to take famous lines from poems and mesh them together into one but it seemed too hard to do so i tried this. |
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