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Of Beautiful Dancers
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Of Beautiful Dancers |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Of Beautiful Dancers The dancers fly in elaborate steps They seem but a blur How is it that I'm to tell Dancer from the dance? The floor that began so high Now through steps a hole The blurs are dancers I believe But I truly cannot tell As without a mask removed I cannot see what’s meant Is the hole an accident Or planned to force us down? There is peace here to be found But the dance it robs it all As the dancers fly once again I cannot see their beauty How is it that I can lift A dancer from the dance When I cannot tell where the dancers end And our horrid dance begins? "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl "Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl (Yes I am crazy) [This message has been edited by Earl Robertson (02-17-2008 05:18 PM).] |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
wow there was a feeling about this piece, wow frank. added to my library, and i love to dance, wow that was random. lol. but that's what i am, just a random . . . . -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I'll bet you kate could guess exatly what this is about. Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
once again Earl, this one is going in my library. lol great work. the meaning is sort of a blur to me but i might understand it later. lol. can't wait to see more!! ~Zach~ |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Alright explantion time!!! this is what was going through my head as I wrote this The dancers are people (suprise suprise) in my life. I am one of them, now the question is how can I tell the dancer from the dance? Whats the dance then? The dance is the games we play. Be it in love friendship, life ect ect. Thus "There is peace here to be found but the dance it robs it all" I didn't realy do that justice but whatever you guys are poets, your good with all this hidden meaning crap. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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