the difference between the sea and the rest of the world (really untitled)

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Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

0 posted 2008-02-18 09:52 AM

like most of my poems, its really untitled.

hope you like!
xoxo,
Jaki H
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I try so hard to forget my past,
hide it under lock and key
those mid-summer days when I was in love!-
and the word was just You and Me

beautiful fields and the smell of the sea,
and late night stories of ghosts
I miss those days tremendously!-
but it's You that I miss the most

and you, yes You! were my lighthouse,
which saved me from rocks on the coast
beaming with sunshine and laughter,-
at happiness you were my host

and yet I try to forget this dream-
for the World is not just You and Me
their eyes are open, but Refuse to see!
cannot comprehend what true love be!

So,
I'll lock it up
but You and I shall share the key

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-02-18 10:12 AM

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this was beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it going in my library (honestly i'm in love with the sea and . . . . . anything about it . . . lol)

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

2 posted 2008-02-18 10:36 AM

aww! thank you! you always have such positive feedback! it makes me happy! and i dont think ive ever seen a poem of yours i didnt like (honestly!)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-02-18 12:41 PM

aww thanks, i try to be postive it makes me happy to tell people how much i love their stuff- i love to put smiles on people who deserve it.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-02-18 02:21 PM

aww this is so beautiful. i know how you feel. it reminds me of my girlfriend... Great job. this poem is deffenently going to my library!

~Zach~

"Nice guys finish last"

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

5 posted 2008-02-18 03:06 PM

thank you all!!!!! one question though... what library? i was not aware we had one...

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

6 posted 2008-02-18 03:52 PM

the library is a privite one of yours. You can save a link ot a poem or poet that you like. The way to save stufff to your library is to first comment the poem that you like and it will say underneith the box where you comment or write. "Add Thread to Library: You may add this thread to your privite library." and once you do this right by the Member's Area/Help box it will say "Privite library" its one of the box's. hopefully that will help!

~Zach~

"Nice guys finish last"

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

7 posted 2008-02-18 03:55 PM

oh thanks a ton! wow, i never even noticed that box before! this is so exciting! i can save the stuff i like!!!

thanks a bunch!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

8 posted 2008-02-18 04:13 PM

jaki you're so funny! lol. it took me so long to figure this place out myself. lol. i just never thought of asking . . . umm i shall ponder this new thought.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

9 posted 2008-02-18 04:17 PM

Your welcome Jaki. if you have any other question for me. Feel free to ask! i dont mind! i like to help people. lol

~Zach~

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

10 posted 2008-02-18 06:47 PM

I love this poem! It's soo amazing and yes (ROFL) it's going in my library.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

11 posted 2008-02-18 06:51 PM

i really like this ... it is so sweet!

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

12 posted 2008-02-18 10:51 PM

YAY FOR LIBRARIES!!!

and all of you guys.
when i have a chance i shall write a poem about how nice everyone here is.

until then, i look foward to reading more of everyones stuff and learning about you all through it.

xoxo,
Jaki

Jaki H
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since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

13 posted 2008-02-18 10:53 PM

oh, and if anyone dosent know i was writing about my "secret love" teehee it feels so weird typing this...

if anyone does not know, i believe i mentioned my little situation in a poem about the two lovebirds. that or the dad one. not quite sure. whatever. bye.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

14 posted 2008-02-19 12:56 PM

Jaki!!!!! I loved this it wuz the sweetest poem.. I know this feeling so well... hope to read more soon!
Krysti

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