Teen Poetry #8 |
Love- Meh, who Needs it? |
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Love- Meh, who Needs it? So love has always deemed Itself to all the world But the evil men don’t give it Though they may get some in return Can you say that you love me? And mean it too You’re not an evil man So half baked words won’t do If the world was filled with feeling Then could we all be more But these are just pathetic thoughts Of a mind filled up with lore But can’t you see what I’m doing now I’m making myself sick with good intentions That do nothing for me But give me back hand pensions I’m seeing all their happiness And I sin for I’m coveting Everything that they have built Is slowly killing me If only you were open I could be what you have wished But sadly you will never Be much more than this and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow amazing. i know how you feel.love who really needs it right? ~Zach~ |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
me me me mememememememme! i need it! i just love to bash it when i'm upset by it . . . lol ;p. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
ROFL! me to Kate! I need it to! I hope you can feel better. Love is the greatest thing in life but it is complicating... "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
you got that right earl! love is way too complicated lol ~Zach~ |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
i like it! your really honestly right. i know you were just venting cause you were mad but if you think about all the lives we could save without love its astonishing! |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
all teh lives we could save without love . . . umm that is an ingtiguing thought . . . . and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
And completely true... If we were all mindless zombies there would be less cases of depression, suicide, devorce and all those other heartbreaking, life-ruining things. lol "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
interesting and true thought. The lives we could all save if there was no love but how dull of a world would that be without love? lol ~Zach~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Great poem Kate Darling.. just adding me own two cents... if we had no love yess indeed there would be less deaths.... but look at us...!!! we are already soooo over populated hehe.. ohh dear.. that wuz out of line wasn't it OOPS.. but n e waiz... loved this sooo true!! Krysti |
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