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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-02-15 06:12 AM

these are the rambles
from a broken man who speaks
mumbling of everything
that he has ever seen

and even as you pass him
you never really care
what he says doesnt matter
is that really fair

have you ever tried
to fill his shoes
or to think like him
when you have the blues

because we dont know
what this man has seen
we dont know
how many times hes had to bleed

we dont know
what hes been though
does he have a family
we have no clue

but yet we judge him
like everyone else
and as you go by
you dont think how he felt

this is the way
the world works
judge or be judged
hurt or get hurt

LittleWillow
Member

since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

1 posted 2008-02-15 08:20 AM

Wow this is great, i love it!

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-15 10:34 AM

Great poem. i love this poem. i know how you feel.

~Zach~

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-02-15 03:20 PM

Dang it! Isn't it like that though? As much as we 'wish' it weren't we all do it!
Great write as always Mr Orange! I love your stuff.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2008-02-15 09:54 PM

thank you all so much

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-02-16 11:18 AM

because we dont know
what this man has seen
we dont know
how many times hes had to bleed

wow- you're so talented, man, if i had half the talent you had i'd try (and likely suceed) to make money off of it.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2008-02-16 03:17 PM

wow love this... great write!!
Krysti

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

7 posted 2008-02-17 12:16 PM

oh wow! i love this. its really insightful and totally true. i never would have thought to write of that!

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