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Teen Poetry #8

Please Read And Tell Me Your Answer... Thank You

Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2008-02-13 07:16 PM

Who are you?
Who am I?
Who are you to say its a lie?

What is it?
Is it I?
Is it all by and by?

Where are you?
Where am I?
Where is it that we fly?

When will I?
When will you?
When will all this be through?

Why are we?
Why are they?
Why are we the ones to say?

How can I?
How can you?
How can all this be true?

** can you all be so kind as to tell me what YOU think this is about and a title for it Please and thank you?

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-02-13 07:47 PM

it's a little confusing if you try to settle on one topic but when u think about it, everyones thoughts are usually all over the place. What i got out of it was mostly just questions about life, confussion and worry. Great poem though.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-13 08:02 PM

Hmmm how about "who are u, who am I?" idk im just thinking cuz this poem is a little bit confusing. so yeah...

~Zach~

Lordadon
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since 2008-02-14

Posts 18
Singapore

3 posted 2008-02-15 03:33 AM

This seems like someone who is looking for an answer to life, and is confused about life, someone is at a point of their life, if u're looking into the title being a gist of this poem, i would recommend.

"Answers"

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2008-02-15 09:53 AM

I'm not fully sure what this is about but I am pretty sure it is about someone who is questioning their life and the lives of others.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

5 posted 2008-02-15 02:00 PM

Well to be completely honest I have no clue what it is about. And well all of your answers are truthful interpretations the only answer I got later was" oh... so this is why my friend wont let me drink coffee!"

That was as I was merrily buzzing of the walls in suspended animation and I have been contemplating it ever since. And I think you’re all right, still there something... more.

Thank you all a hundredfold. Abbeon.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2008-02-16 11:48 AM

ohhh Beckie!!!! I loved this so many questions we awl want answers to but.... are there really answers to these questions any way??? But I hope tue read more soon
Love yooh!!
Krysti

Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

7 posted 2008-02-20 03:16 PM

Krysti you are a genius!!!! I believe you are right these are questions that don't seem to have an answer you and all the others are Brilliant!!!!

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

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