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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland 
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im drowned in my head from this blood on my hands and their grasp on this cold shining blade. this coffin holds tight as i lay limp and smiling inside, with the secret now found. finally, i sleep in the ground. FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
ok...I didn't write this!! My friend accidentally posted it under my name! SHE DESEVES THE COMMENTS! Tracey, this is amazing...as i said before. Keep it up!!!....k bye! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
This is awesome! Nice to meet you Tracy. Your poem has great flow and I realy enjoyed it. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
haha nice poem. its a good start. but frankly i like your other poems better Tracey. lol ~Zach~ |
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