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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2008-02-17 10:28 PM



Hidden From our Minds

So it’s true what they say,
That the eyes behold the soul
They are the Master’s center piece
The key to every role

It’s a miracle that we live today-
When we rot our lovely world
With pictures, tech and rays with sound
And sights that we have swirled

So can we come to do this?
The task which Master hands
Can we love our fellow beings,
And do it on command?

It would be so simple
Just pray, then ask, forgive
But we fail to follow simple love
As we disremember how to live

So this never ending fountain,
These eternal roles we play
Are all part of a grander scheme
That our minds have kept at bay

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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1 posted 2008-02-17 10:49 PM


Wow this is soo true.

"So this never ending fountain,
These eternal roles we play
Are all part of a grander scheme
That our minds have kept at bay"

Wow i love that line. Keep up the good work!!!

~Zach~

"Nice guys finish last"

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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2 posted 2008-02-17 10:58 PM


So it’s true what they say,
That the eyes behold the soul
They are the Master’s center piece
The key to every role

Thats the best I agree completely. I love eyes cause they can't lie!
Amazing poem! headed for my library

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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