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Teen Poetry #8

This Valentine

lustforgood
Junior Member

since 2008-01-01

Posts 14
singapore, singapore

0 posted 2008-02-13 01:01 PM

This is suppose to be lyrics I suppose to write for my band. cheers
This Valentine's

And I can't pretend that I'm thinking
My time and you when my thoughts is singing
The song so sad and never ending
When you won't leave it's over, over

The days are hard and tears so cold
Seer darkness my eyes behold
The days of sorrow won't end
Until I walk with you hand in hand.

So today I'm sorry
That favour never for me
Do what I can to make this happen
So that with you I'm here

The night I think I'm to blame
This honour never near to fame
It's over not saying the end.
When the song's still on and faith in hand

So today I'm sorry
That favour never for me
Do what I can to make this happen
So that with you I'm here

Tears aren't falling and clouds are grey
Raindrops covering everywhere
When you with me, when you I see

So today I'm sorry
That favour never for me
Do what I can to make this happen
So that with you I'm here

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-02-13 05:37 PM

nice write

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-02-13 07:01 PM

I liked it. Wish I could hear the song though... Oh well.
Great poetry in any event!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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