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i dont want you
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i dont want you |
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Gurl_unknown_11 Junior Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 17california |
i was dying to know you i was thriving to see who you were i was waiting to love you you didnt let me in i couldnt know you i stopped wondering who you really were i couldnt love you and now i cant stand you everything i did was for you i fixed myself hopeing you'd take a second look i changed thinking mayebe you'd care i lost myself wishing youd find me again but everything i did you couldnt seem to see you never look at me any different you still didnt care even when what i did was for you you never found me you didnt even take the time to look but now im lost cant find who i really am and this is all because of you i wish i'd never known you i wish id never seen you i wish i could stop pretending and tell you how i really feel i wish you were here to care. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
i really like this poem... great job!! |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Amazing. I loved it the emotion and wow! Great job. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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