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Teen Poetry #8
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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
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washington, US
0 posted 2008-02-12 08:54 PM


i think i love you

how can this be?
how is it you snuck up on me?
just when i think
i start to sink

it always comes back without fail
could i bail?
no no my heart says

you barely know me
oh well i guess i will have to wait and see
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1 posted 2008-02-13 08:30 PM

Hmm not your best poem but it wasn't too bad.. I like your other poems
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