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wolf girl
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0 posted 2008-02-11 10:37 PM



i run through the forest of the night
i run to the fight
i have a secret to keep
during the night the truth is hard to keep
my body morphs

at first my body ahces
then i start to shake
i can hear the crack
as my spine extendeds and doubles back

i run to keep my secret
before it is unleashes
if they knew they would kill me
for they fear me because im so much greater than they could ever be

i can feel the earth under my paws
it is much easier to move
the moons shines very bright
in the forest of the night

© Copyright 2008 Jenna - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-02-11 10:44 PM


This poem is awsome. its like im reading a story or something. im just gunna take a wild guess but is this poem about werewolf's?
Earl Robertson
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2 posted 2008-02-11 10:44 PM


Good write! You have good style.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

wolf girl
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3 posted 2008-02-11 10:47 PM


yeah it is and its a repost but see i wrote this one a while ago. lately ive havent been able to write anything. ive been sick for the last 2 weeks. its my stress. im never inspired anymore. if you guys have suggestions let me know. i need to get out of this funk.

-jenna

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4 posted 2008-02-12 08:45 AM


okay umm let me think of something for you to write. u seem to be able to write very well when it comes to nature. umm write about nature and relate it to yourself. i wrote a poem like that. if you want to check it out and get some ideas look at my poem called "the rain"  
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