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the forest of the night (abstract)
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the forest of the night (abstract) |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
i run through the forest of the night i run to the fight i have a secret to keep during the night the truth is hard to keep my body morphs at first my body ahces then i start to shake i can hear the crack as my spine extendeds and doubles back i run to keep my secret before it is unleashes if they knew they would kill me for they fear me because im so much greater than they could ever be i can feel the earth under my paws it is much easier to move the moons shines very bright in the forest of the night |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
This poem is awsome. its like im reading a story or something. im just gunna take a wild guess but is this poem about werewolf's? |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Good write! You have good style. "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
yeah it is and its a repost but see i wrote this one a while ago. lately ive havent been able to write anything. ive been sick for the last 2 weeks. its my stress. im never inspired anymore. if you guys have suggestions let me know. i need to get out of this funk. -jenna |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
okay umm let me think of something for you to write. u seem to be able to write very well when it comes to nature. umm write about nature and relate it to yourself. i wrote a poem like that. if you want to check it out and get some ideas look at my poem called "the rain" |
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