Teen Poetry #8 |
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The Depressing Pressure of Keys |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN ![]() |
The Depressing Pressure of Keys There's a finger on my neck pressing harder by the minute until I let go of my fears. But you never asked me to, You never asked me. Cover my eyes with prints and creases and press, its all so pressing. I have a headache, Thats the key. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Dang young_blood, I can never figure out your cryptic poems! Good write! But ummm do you mind explaining yourself, before my vague suspitions and half-formed conclutions drive me any More insane? "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
Its about the pressure the of blind love. Its demanding and freeing and crushing. The pressure builds until you ignore the source and just blame the symptoms. Its the depressing pressure of keys. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Oh wow now it all fits!!! I see sheer brilliance! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
haha. I'm glad that it all came together. honestly, i had to sit there and try to remember what i was saying. haha. thank you for reading earl. -alex |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
very nice nery nice. nice pic -jenna |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thanks? haha no really thanks for reading. glad you like the picture too. |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow nice write. i resently *when i mean resent i do mean like today ugh* broke up with my girlfriend. it wasnt that hard ot understand your poem i like it alot. keep up the writing! |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you guys for taking the time to read. i appreciate it. |
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