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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
im trying to do a abstract write. i think this is horrible but tell me what you think. help please! _____________________________________________ twirling wirling spinning curling nothing stops free i can fly i will never die bounce bounce hit hit plea thats it |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
hmm not bad for a begainer abstract writer. i like it. =) |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
Not bad at all. Quite good acctualy. Keep it up! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
like they said, its not bad. the point of being abstract is to loosely connect ideas. they should flow, but not be obvious. keep working and crafting.  |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
great start!! I couldn't even begin to write abstract.. Krysti |
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